Lines, Proportion, Time
You didn't focus on ANY of those, Your lines are bad, your proportions resemble nothing of the original, and you probably did this in about 10 minutes......rather than taking your time and finishing a good piece.
sorry to be harsh,
nice try man
Ah, you know this thing soo well. |=D
Great
Hey man this is pretty good but you should make the tip of the finger a little bigger the perspective is off a bit
great work man
Lol.
I was lookin at my finger pinted at my face while I drew it. And the tip of my finger stays the same size as the middle when I put it to perspective.
Anyhoos, thanks for rating :D
-Rooshie
Nice
This is REALLY really good man
definitely in my favorites
cheers thats what i wanna hear.
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